Friday, August 6th, 2010

Writing Prompt: Nature’s Calling

HummingbirdOne evening, eating dinner outside on the deck, my family and I were buzzed by a hummingbird. Apparently, we were invading his territory: all the flowers he likes to frequent on the deck.

I enjoyed his visit so much, I hung up a feeder.

Within days, I had more than one bird calling. And I’ve seen as many as four at a time vying for space.

I’m certain they must have all been in the neighborhood, just not visiting me at the same time. The feeder is acting a bit like a water cooler: a place where all the hummingbirds can hang out together.

Or so I thought.

The birds are fighting.

I know this because I hung the feeder in a location where I can see it from nearly any window on the back of the house. And while I’m home, I’ve been watching.

HummingbirdOne bird in particular, has been very territorial.

He chases off all the other birds when he’s around.

This morning, I watched them fight in the air, appearing to dance, or mate: swirling and turning, zooming high into the sky and then spiraling down, one bird always chasing the other.

Lately, the territorial bird has taken to sitting on the nail above the feeder, keeping watch for other birds. I’ve watched him watching.

His little head moves back and forth, almost as if he’s viewing a tennis match, but always alert for another hummer. He won’t allow them within even a few feet of the feeder. He attacks as soon as another hummingbird shows interest in drinking.

(Seems like craziness, if you ask me. There’s no way he’ll be able to consume everything in the feeder!)

Being able to watch these little guys has killed a lot of my preconceived notions about hummingbirds. I’m filled with awe. (And I know these creatures will soon play a role in one of my stories.)

Here’s your prompt: Step outside your door and admire nature. (Even if you live in the city, there’s got to be something you can observe: ants in the crack of the sidewalk, bees attracted to a flower box, squirrels in the park, etc.) Look for something that you’ve not paid attention to in the past. Observe until you notice something you didn’t know before. Now write about it. Write a vignette about what you’ve seen, including your observations. Use your new knowledge to flesh out the setting of a story you’re currently working on. Or, simply journal about it. If you journal, write how you feel about what you’ve learned.

Hummingbird

4 comments to Writing Prompt: Nature’s Calling

  • Cori B

    Love the capture of the hummingbird sitting still – beautiful.
    My mom stepped out on the deck today and she said, “I see ripe figs.” Needless to say I’ll be plowing through my fig recipes again very soon.

    Miss you guys.

  • Sue

    Beautiful photos!! Hummingbirds are territorial. Can’t hang two feeders in the same vicinity. We have one at the back door and tried hanging another one in the front yard. Thought maybe if they can’t see each other, it might work. I saw a hummingbird fluttering around the feeder yesterday before the storm was completely over–figured all the birds would be hunkered down like I was.

  • Hi Cori! Thanks for the lovely comments about my photography. Tough to capture hummingbirds with the equipment I have, plus through the window (well, over the top sash) and from a distance. I’m considering leaving the camera outside for a while and seeing if I can capture any remotely. I took over 50 pics to get the few semi-decent ones. Wish the last one weren’t so blurry.

    I heard your mom was doing better. Send her my best wishes, okay?

    Yay for figs! Tasty, tasty, tasty! My (finally) fruit-bearing specimen was mown down last year by the lawn dude. He promised to replace it, and has not. I’m so disappointed.

  • Hi Sue!

    I had no idea how territorial these little creatures are! It’s been exciting to watch. So feeders in the front and in the back didn’t work? Too bad, I might have tried that here.

    Thanks for the kind words about the photos. I wish they were more clear, but the fact is: they were shot from a distance and they small photos on my blog are cropped down.

    My camera has a remote…I may need to employ that… 🙂

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